Overview of the feedback
Strengths:
- Established the main character
- Running in the woods shots were effective and ran smoothly together
- Beginning of title sequence replicates the match
- Shots of the main character of the beginning is efficient for showing who is the main character
Weaknesses:
- Can't tell what genre it is - we must try to make the Drama conventions evident
- In the beginning of the title sequence, we must try to replicate the match-cut effect
- Framing of some shots are not as good as they should be - especially when main character was running , we was not able to catch his pace and therefore not get the right frame
- Link some shots by adding black screens (create a fade-in or fade-out effect)
- Have different variety of shots - just get more shots. (e.g. high, low, medium shots etc)
- The cuts at the beginning need to be longer - (using fade-in or fade-out effect)
What we will do in the next editing session?
- We will take into consideration of the all the weaknesses listed above. Hopefully, if there is time to reshoot we could reshoot some of the shots that look shaky or the framing isn't good.
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